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I know its a lot of info….but I have to include it all….does it all seem to fit together alright? If you have any suggestions….please place an asterick* after you copy/paste so I know right where the alterations would look better. Thanks so much! 10 points for Best Answer rewarded ASAP~~~~~~~<3
PS: Since there is a bit of 'gloom' I wanted to add a little bit of something pleasant...how did I do? What would you change, you are all the pro's =]
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Our service is dedicated to correcting property titles and helping people gain home ownership when the original owner has departed. Lack of a written will and testament, as well as financial difficulties can make owning the home of a deceased loved one an uphill battle. We specialize in complex situations, bringing simplicity in to your life, and easing the transition of ownership.
Seven days a week, both day and night, we are here to lend you a helping hand, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
Personal, Confidential, and _____________ (any suggestions?)
Arleen Hogsett
10 Points for Best Answer passed out ASAP =]
I have to have most/all of this information on my business card. I have the whole back side, however, I still feel that it needs to be downsized….so do you have any better way of wording this, including the info, but just doing it better than I can? Thanks =]
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Our service is dedicated to correcting property titles and helping people gain home ownership when the original owner(s) have departed.
Lack of a written will and testament, as well as financial difficulties, can make owning the home of a deceased friend or loved one a challenge. Our combined forces will help you to achieve ownership, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
Please give us a call and let us help you benefit from our experience. Contact us day or night, we are happy to assist you seven days a week.
Forrest Pesante
It’s my senior year in high school, and my band director is letting all the band seniors give their “last will and testament” in front of the other band members this Friday. I have no clue what to say. o.O Don’t ask me why he’s letting us do this when the school year is still young….
So what exactly should I say? It has to be short….yet good. I’m not good at talking in front of people. That’s why I’m asking. You’d think I would probably know what to say, but I really have no idea where to start. It can’t be terribly long, either. It has to be two minutes or less. I don’t really know what to say because I generally don’t talk to a lot of people in school. What do I say in front of a bunch of people I don’t socialize with?
Randal Isaacson
10 Points for Best Answer passed out ASAP =]
I have to have most/all of this information on my business card. I have the whole back side, however, I still feel that it needs to be downsized….so do you have any better way of wording this, including the info, but just doing it better than I can? Thanks =]
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Our service is dedicated to correcting property titles and helping people gain home ownership when the original owner(s) have departed.
Lack of a written will and testament, as well as financial difficulties, can make owning the home of a deceased friend or loved one a challenge. Our combined forces will help you to achieve ownership, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
Please give us a call and let us help you benefit from our experience. Contact us day or night, we are happy to assist you seven days a week.
Jessia Bonsignore
10 Points for Best Answer rewarded ASAP….!
Headline:
Owning the home you’re in can be difficult to achieve when
the original owner has departed
It can be extremely difficult in some situations when the original owner of a house does not write out a personal will and testament. The difficulty in this situation is taking their name off the title, and putting a new name on it. Working together with experienced professionals, under your own terms, will benefit you legally with home ownership choices such as; selling, renting, or getting a home equity Loan, at your request.
We can help you if you have had concerns in the past such as:
- Having a friend/family member pass away with no written will
- Having no money to pay for attorney & court fees
- Not making property tax payments on a home that is considered “stuck” in another person’s name
Options I can assist you with are:
- Paying for all “up front” expenses, until you are legally the owner
- Coordinating with attorneys & court officials to obtain home ownership, representing you in court, with or without a written will
- Filing legal paperwork to protect your stay within the property
- Getting you a secure bank issued cashiers check
- Arranging payment on property taxes that are due
- Creating financial security
A case like this is more likely to be dismissed by many attorneys
because of their complexity and sensitive nature. I however, work along side title professionals and attorneys who specialize in difficult real estate matters making it easy to “clean up” property titles, transferring the new ownership to you.
For free information over the phone or in person, Contact us day or night, we are happy to assist you seven days a week. Let us help you benefit from our experience. call us at (xxx) xxx-xxxx, and ask for *** XXXXXXXXXX
And of course everything is spaced right on my document, im just interested in spelling/grammar/english/ any type of mistake, how does it look, and is everything very clear? Thanks so much, I could NOT have finished this without all of you!!! <3 <3 And any alterations, just add an asterick* so I know how to you think I should change it.
Alexander Vathroder
10 Points for Best Answer passed out ASAP =]
I have to have most/all of this information on my business card. I have the whole back side, however, I still feel that it needs to be downsized….so do you have any better way of wording this, including the info, but just doing it better than I can? Thanks =]
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Our service is dedicated to correcting property titles and helping people gain home ownership when the original owner(s) have departed.
Lack of a written will and testament, as well as financial difficulties, can make owning the home of a deceased friend or loved one a challenge. Our combined forces will help you to achieve ownership, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
Please give us a call and let us help you benefit from our experience. Contact us day or night, we are happy to assist you seven days a week.
Viola Candell
At first I was going to have the first section on the back of my business card……..then everyone kind of said it was too long….however it makes sense and it is handed out to specified people, so hopefully they would actually take the time to read it.
The new addition is at the complete bottom, with bullets. What sounds better? And now that I have made this new addition to consider…..can you help me modify the one with bullets??? Thanks =]
Best Answer rewarded ASAP! ~~~~~<3
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[OLD-Said I should change the following]
Our specialty is correcting real estate property titles when the original owner is deceased. Our goal is to simplify complex issues in the absence of a legal written will, easing the transition of home ownership.
Personal and Confidential, Seven days a week, both day and night, we are here to lend you a helping hand, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
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[New: How should I edit? Or is the first one better]
Correcting real estate titles one day at a time
Assisting you with any of the following
- Absence of a loved one’s written will & testament
- Having no money to pay for attorney & court fees
- Owing back taxes or city fees
- Proper representation in court
- Filing legal paperwork to protect your stay within the property
- Getting you a secure bank issued cashier’s check
- Creating financial security
Input pleeeeease =]
you are all great...I really admire all of you =]
Azalee Kratt
Business Name: Home Title Solutions
Motto/Trademark: Personal Professional Confidential
What we do: We are basically like a probate company, we help people get legal title to a property when a relative leaves no will, etc…
In small font on the back of my business card it will say this:
Hi, I’m Sandra Martin, here to help you transfer the property title of the home you currently reside in (or care for), giving you legal home ownership. If a deceased home owner (or missing person) leaves no Last Will & Testament, it can be very difficult to put a new person’s name on title to the home. We are a 3rd generation company who have helped tens of thousands of people, just like you, throughout California with our combined 135 years of experience.
Please re-word the above part so it sounds more smooth and flow-y, along with it making more sense….?? also…does this make sense??? The person who receives it will get a pretty good idea of what we do, because the people who receive it…are living in a house that their grandma owned, they moved in, and dont pay rent, but live there like home owners, only they do not have legal title to the house…
Quinn Schwarzlose
Thanks so much to those of you who answered on the last round, you people are AMAZINGGGGGGG. As soon as I am able to reward those 10 points off I will! (I must wait 4 hours remember). So here is the revised wording. For those of you who didn’t go to my last question, this will be somewhere on my business card (I know its a lot!)~~~And I just want to know from this point what would look good revised………..again???? Thanks so much.
Additional: Do you think I should have it put together in one tight combined little paragraph? Or kind of separated a bit on the card as follows:
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Our service is dedicated to correcting property titles and helping people gain home ownership when the original owner(s) have departed.
Lack of a written will and testament, as well as financial difficulties, can make owning the home of a deceased friend or loved one a challenge. Our combined forces will help you to achieve complete ownership, regardless of how difficult the situation may be.
Please give us a call and let us help you benefit from our experience. Contact us day or night, we are happy to assist you seven days a week.
Elena



